The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.
The given diagram provides an outline of the stages
in
generating electricity from Change preposition
of
water
.
Overall
, the process begins with water
in the ocean and ends with power being provided to buildings, such
as hospitals and schools.
To begin
with, the heat of the sun evaporates water
in the ocean. As a result
, the water
rises and forms into clouds. When it rains, these clouds drop some of their water
into a reservoir, which is a large area used to store water
. The water
is kept in the reservoir with a dam that can be opened with a valve to release water
down a hill. When the valve is opened the water
flows down the hill and spins a turbine, sending electricity through high-voltage cables to a transformer station. From the transformer station, the electricity is sent to various places where it is needed, such
as homes and factories.
An extra point to note is that after the water
passes through the turbine, it is pumped back up into the reservoir using extra power that is
available so that the water
can be used again to spin the turbines and generate power.Submitted by salena.ketpueak on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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