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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation at this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. Detail about the conference. Why do you want your colleague to give the presentation? What arrangement you will make for this conference?

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Dear Johnson, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you, i arranged a conference meeting to introduce herbal
product
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products
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. I am Smith, work as a senior manager for the herbal department.You have to prepare a presentation regarding
this
product
.
This
 meeting will be held on 28th May in the hall. You need to mention the
product
 details ,
for instance
, benefits, ingredients ,and advantages of
this
product
.
Besides
this
,you love to do creative work, you have an opportunity to show your creativity in front of higher authorities
as well as
 a chance to get a promotion from your current position. I will arrange a modern projector with a laser pen.
Apart from
this
, refreshment resources are available
also
.If you need any help do not hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Smith
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task response
Consider providing more details about the conference, including its objectives and expected outcomes, to enhance task response.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your letter more effectively, grouping similar ideas for better coherence.
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Expand on the arrangements' specifics for the conference to give a clearer picture and fulfill the task more thoroughly.
task response
You successfully described the conference's purpose and why your colleague has been chosen for the presentation, satisfying key aspects of the task response.
coherence cohesion
The tone of the letter is polite and formal, which is suitable for the context of writing to a colleague about a professional matter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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