The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.

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trips taken by male and female drivers in the year 2005.

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,

male

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gender was driving to go

on

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several purposes

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as work, visiting town, and recreation

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the

female

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tend

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to

driving

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to courses,

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,

running

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errands,

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friends and shopping. Looking into more details,

male

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was dominated driving to work with more than 50

percent

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while

the female almost 40

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.

In addition

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recreation become second highest for

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gender where about more than 10

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whereas

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females

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with less than 5

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.

On the other hand

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was

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dominated more

trips

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purposes.

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the highest

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trips taken by

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was to go shopping with almost 20

percent

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while

male

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males

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only about 10

percent

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.

Second,

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female

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was

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driving to courses

with

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amore

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more

a more

than 10

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and

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followed by

male

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males

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with approximately 8

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.

Lastly

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majorities female

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the majority of females

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driving

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to several places

such

as

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the bank

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bank

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,

running

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errands,

visiting

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and visiting

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friends with less than 10

percent

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in proportion.