The diagram below shows the plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the plan of the public library 20 years ago and the present . Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is clearly noticeable that major changes were made . Added new facilities
such
as computer
room
, cafe and self-service machines . In the past ,the central library had as soon as entered there was
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Enquiry desk with tickets , book return on
right-hand
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the right-hand
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side
and a Reading
room
with newspaper , and magazines on
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side
. In the middle of
hall
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the hall
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, there were two tables with chairs, Adult
fiction
books
and CDs , videos, and computer games on
left
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the left
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side
on the opposite
side
Adult
fiction
books
and children's
books
At present, the enquiry desk replaced with a new cafe , reading
room
with a computer place .
Adult
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The adult
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fiction
books
area
also
includes an Information desk
as well as
Self-service machines .All the reference
books
are on the left
side
.On
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left-handhand
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left-hand hand
left-hand and
left-hand-hand
corner are new two sofas with Storytelling events with Children's
fiction
books
. New lecture
room
on
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right-hand
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the right-hand
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corner .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, side, fiction, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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