The bar chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender the last year
The following bar chart depicts the illiteracy rate in 6 country groups divided by gender of people. The information is from
last
year.
Overall
, we can observe that the illiteracy rate of females was higher in each shown region. The highest percentage of illiterate we can see in South Asia, on the other
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In developed and east asian countries
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of illiterate males were less than 10%. In America
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of illiterate females was generally higher than men's percentages
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