the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
The chart presents two varying ways
for
producing black Change preposition
of
tea
. Overall
, the process has at
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apply
all
9 stages, starting with harvesting the Correct determiner usage
apply
tea
leaves to frying the rolled leaves.
To begin
with, the tea
leaves must be picked off, it is important that only bud and 2 top leaves to
be chosen for Remove the particle
apply
this
. Following that, the tea
leaves are placed on a rack and withered by a fan to keep the moisture out after which the process splits in
two methods of production, traditional where leaves are rolled flatChange the preposition
into
,
so that enzymes Remove the comma
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could
be released from them or the modern method where the leaves are cut into smaller Wrong verb form
can
granuler
pieces.
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granular
granules
granule
The next step is
oxidation/fermentation where rolled leaves are left on cement so that they could
change their colour to copper Wrong verb form
can
due to
the enzymes in the air. The last
step is that copper leaves are left in the ovens and fired, releasing flavour and aroma and keeping 97% of moisture
out.Add an article
the moisture
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