The process diagram illustrates the manufacturing of bricks for the building industry in seven steps.
The diagram shows the creation of
bricks
for the developing industry.
Overall
, the building of bricks
has seven steps which are 3 stages to create bricks
, 2 stages to cook bricks
, and 2 stages to send to industry.
In the first step, the digger retrieves clay from the wetland. After that, the clay was put in the metal grid and roller. Next step, the clay can be processed with sand and water to create bricks
. Then
, the process
of creating bricks
has two tools which use a wire cutter and mould. Fourth step, the bricks
are put in the oven for the drying process
which is 24 hours
to 48 hours
.
After the bricks
are dried, the bricks
are put in the clin to dry process
which is moderate and high processes different process
which is 200 Celsius
to 980 Celsius
and 870 Celsius
to 1300 Celsius
, respectively. After that, the bricks
are put in the cooling chamber for 48 hours
to 72 hours
. Final process
, some bricks
are put in the package and ready to send to the industry.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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