The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
#show #percentages #men #women #employment #four #countries #summaries #information #features #comparison
The
given
bar chart presents the proportion of Verb problem
apply
men
and women
aged between 60 and 64 in workforces in four nations, Australia, Japan
, the USA, and Belgium
, in 1970 and 2000. Overall
, the employment rate of both
men
and women
in Japan
was the highest among others, while
Belgium
was recently the lowest in both
genders.
In 1970, Japan
had the highest number of men
and women
engaged in career markets, while
both
Australia and the USA were the smallest when specifically for men
. Moreover
, Belgium
was significantly lower compared to others when focusing on women
.
Finally
, in 2000, Belgium
was decreased in both
sexes, while
men
were massively dropped by 60 per cent. Both
genders in Japan
remained at the top of the group, which were small changes in the amount of workforce compared to the past three decades, its less than 8 per cent drop. Furthermore
, the employment rate in men
trending to higher than women
in all nations.Submitted by salena.ketpueak on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, japan, belgium, both with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
▼