a friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. he has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. In this letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. - decribe some possible disadvantages . - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear friend,
I’m writing
this
letter to you in order to provide with
some advice which I learnt Correct pronoun usage
you with
it
from my experience in Correct pronoun usage
apply
campaign
since I heard from my Add an article
the campaign
a campaign
brother in law
that you are planning to go Add a hyphen
brother-in-law
this
summer to campaign
.
First of all, I am sure that will Add an article
the campaign
a campaign
be enjoying
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enjoy
such
a new experience and you will not never forget
it, since you will be switching off from your daily routine life and Rewrite the sentence
will never forget
will not ever forget
move
to the self-independent Wrong verb form
moving
life style
starting, Correct your spelling
lifestyle
besides
that , you cannot imagine how your felling
will be when you Correct your spelling
feeling
breath
a fresh air or drink a pure or wake up early morning on Replace the word
breathe
a
spectacular natural scenery. Remove the article
apply
On the other hand
, you should not forget to take with you some essential items like insecticide, wet wipes, GPS
device, Correct article usage
a GPS
torch
, and Correct article usage
a torch
last
but the least a portable toilet.
The only disadvantage which should considered is that you may more
Add a missing verb
be more
expose
to Replace the word
exposed
a
more risk if you Remove the article
apply
didn’t
take care Wrong verb form
don’t
about
yourself.
Unfortunately, Change preposition
of
due to
my previous commitment with my family
I will not be able to join with Add a comma
family,
wonderful
experience and I wish you all the best and to return home safely.
Truly yours,Add an article
a wonderful
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Task Achievement
Ensure your ideas are fully expanded to clearly communicate your advice and reasoning. Some points could be elaborated on for greater clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs to segregate different points for clearer structure. Each paragraph should express a clear, single idea.
Language Usage
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Format
You've captured the essential components of a good letter, including a greeting, body, and closing.
Content
Your enthusiasm and personal insights make your advice feel genuine and thoughtful.