you recently received a letter fron you bank that should have contained a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter. Write a letter to your bank manager. I your letter, Explain what has happened suggest the credit card should be cancelled for security reasons ask when a new credit card can be sent to you.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to let you know that, as a new credit customer I have been expecting a post from your bank with my credit card attached. However
, that was not the scenario. I did receive the postage, but not the card. It looks like the package was opened before its delivery, leading me to suspect theft.
Since this
is a pre-authorized card that can go into utilization right out of the box, I would like to request an immediate block and cancellation of it before any transactions are made. Along with
being a security threat, any purchases made on this
account could also
severely affect my FICO score.
Additionally
, I would highly appreciate it if you could ship out a new package as soon as possible, but with a requirement of a signature receipt on the package this
time. This
should help prevent further
tampering and a safe receipt.
I eagerly look forward to your response on the same.
Yours Faithfully,
JacobSubmitted by praneeth2094 on
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coherence cohesion
For even better coherence, transitions between paragraphs could be more seamless adding phrases that more clearly link the explanation of the problem to the requested actions.
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To excel in task response, consider expanding on the potential implications of the theft beyond the FICO score, possibly including concerns about personal security or inconvenience, to demonstrate a broader understanding of the situation.
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coherence cohesion
The overall structure of the letter is logical, progressing smoothly from the explanation of the issue to the request for action.
task achievement
Your writing tone is suitably formal and polite, fitting the context of a letter to a bank manager very well.
