You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?
Dear Mr Saleem,
I am writing
this
epistle regarding the neighbours noise that I face every day, especially, when I usually tend to stay in my place.
Honestly, since I came here I heard a loud voice, the crying of children, and other scary sounds. Additionally
, sometimes I thought they hurting each other.
Moving to the heart of the matter, In first time I talked to them, then
I did not see any improvement. Additionally
the next day, I asked their children if they needed any help, but they did not give an answer.
Lastly
, as you are our landlord, I would appreciate it if you could move my apartment location, which you can move from apartment number A3 on the floor ground into number A5 on the third floor.
Thank you again for your attention to this
matter, and hope to get a speedy action about this
situation.
Yours Faithfully,
RaheelSubmitted by x.ra5eelah on
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clarity and specificity
Be sure to directly address the problem more clearly, specifying examples or the impact of the noise on your daily life.
problem-solving
Consider giving more detailed suggestions or possible solutions to your landlord, showcasing a more proactive approach.
grammatical accuracy
Engage in proofreading to catch and correct minor grammatical errors and typos to enhance the overall readability.
task response
Your letter effectively outlines the noise problem, your attempts to resolve it, and a clear request addressed to your landlord.
tone consistency
You maintained a respectful and formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for communication with a landlord.
logical structure
The structure of your letter is logical, with clear separation between paragraphs for each key point.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite