You are visiting a town where you once worked. Write a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about life now. Give him/her details of your visit. Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Junnu,
I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good health. I realized as of late that it has been a while
since we last
caught up. So, I wanted to share some fantastic new changes in my life. I am now working as a Software engineer in Intuit Corporation, California as we always talked about. Along with
good pay they also
provide free food, how exciting is that?
Also
, I am going to be back in town on the 24th of January for an office visit, fully sponsored by the company. The trip is scheduled for a couple of days, but I have made my bookings for the full week. Hence
, I was hoping we could catch up.
Even though it's been about 2 years now, I hope our favourite pop-up bar is still hanging around. I can make reservations for us on the 26th of January, 8:00 PM and come by to pick you up. If you are still located at the same old apartment. Do let me know if the plan works out for you.
Looking forward to your response and hope to see you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
JaanuSubmitted by praneeth2094 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider using a wider range of connectives or transitional phrases to link paragraphs and sentences more effectively.
Task Achievement
For an even more compelling letter, you might add more personal touches or reminiscences that remind your friend of shared experiences, enhancing the personal connection.
Logical Structure
Your letter is well-organized, following a clear and logical structure that effectively conveys your message.
Greeting and Closing
The greeting and closing sections of your letter are warm and appropriate, setting a friendly tone for your correspondence.
Complete Response
You successfully addressed all parts of the task, providing details about your current life, details of your visit, and proposing a plan to meet, which demonstrates a complete response to the task.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone of your letter is suitable for writing to a friend, with a casual yet respectful approach that fosters a sense of warmth and familiarity.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite