The charts below show the percentage of total spending on four different categories by students in a European country from 1985 to 2015.
The pie charts below provide
the
information about the proportion of total bills on four different kinds of Correct article usage
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expenditure
by students in a particular country in Europe between 1985 and 2015. Overall
, the figures for expenditure
on the
food, Correct article usage
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rent
and clothes increased, while
that for entertainment decreased.
The most noticeable feature was that the figure for rent
had increased dramatically over the 30 years
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30-year
period
, reaching its peak at 50% in 2015. The proportion of the spending on the
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rent
outnumbered that on clothes by a ratio of 5 to 1 in 2015. In
the same time, the percentage of Change preposition
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rent
was twice as large as what it was in 1985.
In contrast
, the percentage of the
food and clothes decreased from 30% and 20% to 22% and 10% in Correct article usage
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this
period
. At
the beginning, only a minor gap was reported among the four categories in 1985, with differences Change the preposition
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no
more than 10%.
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Furthermore
, the expenditure
on entertainment experienced significant fluctuation. It increased slightly from 25% to 28% in the first half of this
period
, following a sharp decline in 2005. In the last
20 years, it slipped slowly from 20% to 18%.
Overall
, a large gap could be observed in the proportion of expenditure
on rent
and the remaining three categories in 2015. One of the most prominent features of this
data was that the expenditure
on entertainment remained the same in the period
of
1985 to 1995.Change preposition
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