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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
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The given pie charts display the electricity generation from different fuel sources in separate years, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, in
the
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both countries, total production increased significantly.
Moreover
, in Australia, coal had the highest portion among other fuel sources in both years,
while
 in
the
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France the main source of electricity was allocated to natural
power
 in 2000.
According to
 the first chart, half of the total generation consisted of coal, and
this
 amount went up dramatically to 130
units
 in the end. Despite the fact that
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power
 saw a rising trend
by
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 16 from 36 to 20
units
, natural gas and oil declined, to 2
unite
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 each.
In the
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 second graph shows, in 1980, coal and natural
power
 shared a similar proportion together
totaling
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 50
units
, and the former remained stable and the latter decreased substantially (2
units
)
at the end
 of the period.
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Additionally
Additionslly
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Additionally
, in the beginning, the share of oil, nuclear
power
 and
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Hydropower
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power
were
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 20, 15 and 5
units
, respectively. production from
hyro
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hydro
power
 dropped merely 2
units
,
although
 the electricity generation from nuclear
power
 and oil, with a dramatic increase to 126 and 25
units
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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