The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares
of
Brisk Café's 5 different kinds of food Change preposition
apply
such
as hot coffee
, iced coffee
, ice cream, and soup and salad of their sales in winter
and summer
. Overall
, it is clear that
hot coffee
is far higher than the other foods in winter
while
iced coffee
is slightly higher than others in summer
.
In winter
, around 75 customers order
hot coffee
, whereas
only around 2 customers drink iced coffee
. Other than coffee
, 50 people
choose soup in winter
, while
approximately 25 customers buy ice cream.
In contrast
, 40 people
choose to order
iced coffee
in summer
and nearly 35 people
order
ice cream. Compared to winter
, less than half of people
choose hot coffee
and soup in summer
. The figures for those who order
salad are the same in winter
and summer
, at around 25 people
each.Submitted by unknown on
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