The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph provides data on the average daily
sales
of different five food
, namely hot Fix the agreement mistake
foods
coffee
, iced coffee
, ice cream, soup
and salad
at the Birsk cafe by winter
and summer
.
Overall
, it is clear that
hot coffe
is the most popular Correct your spelling
coffee
food
in winter
. It is also
worth pointing out that salad
show the same number of Fix the agreement mistake
salads
serving
in both seasons.
Looking at the graph in more detail, hot Replace the word
servings
coffee
is the most popular food
at over 70 numbers of serving
in Replace the word
servings
winter
. However
the hot coffee
in summer
showed
less popular than Verb problem
was
winter
Change preposition
in winter
sales
, it experienced 30 servings. The second popular
Correct quantifier usage
most popular
food
in winter
is soup
, it showed half in average daily sales
. The figure for soup
in summer
Add a verb
summer is
summer was
also
less popular than in winter
by around 20 serving
from 50 to roughly 22.
As can Replace the word
servings
see
Wrong verb form
be seen
the
graph, Iced Change preposition
in the
coffee
was
Verb problem
had
a
best Change the article
the
sales
in summer
at 40 servings, followed by ice cream, hot coffee
, soup
and salad
. While
in winter
, Iced coffee
was the least popular food
. However
Add a comma
However,
salad
showed the same servings, it
regardless of the seasons.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, food, coffee, soup, salad, winter, summer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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