The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of a variety of
waste
that is
being disposed of in one country between 1960 and 2011.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the main disposal of
waste
USE SYNONYMS misuse It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score. is changed from paper to food.
However
, some of them still remain in the same place.
To begin
with, paper occupied one quarter in 1960 followed by 17% of textiles. Food and other
waste
represented 12% together
as well as
green
waste
, metal and plastic were about well under 10%.
Moreover
, glass and wood stayed lower by 5%.
Additionally
, food, at 21%, surpassed paper by 6% and became the first place in 2011,
besides
, plastic which was at 18% came second place. Textiles decreased by 6%
while
metal dropped by 1%. Green
waste
and glass held steady at as same as in the year 1960. Other
waste
nosedived by around 8%
on the contrary
, wood rose by exactly 4% in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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