The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph displays the transported amount of
goods
in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four various transportation methods.
Firstly
, the
number
of
goods
which were transported by road had increased in 28 years from nearly 70
million
tonnes
to nearly 100
million
tonnes
, and
goods
tonnes
had declined nearly 2 or 3 per cent from 1978 to 1982, and between 1990 and 1994 its numbers had not changed. Millions of
tonnes
of
goods
rapidly grew by water shipping from 1972 to 1986 but their numbers decreased between 1994 and 1998 and in 2002 water shipping had reached the highest
number
of
goods
which were more than 60
million
tonnes
transported by water shipping.
Secondly
, the popularity of rail transportation nearly had not changed in 28 years, but its popularity had declined from 40M
tonnes
to 30M
tonnes
between 1974 and 1994. The
number
of
goods
which were transported by pipeline drastically increased from nearly 5M
tonnes
to nearly 25M
tonnes
between 1974 and 1982 but its amount decreased to 20
million
tonnes
from 1990 to 1994, in the end, its
number
did not change the rest of the years. In conclusion, there were four various transport methods which were used to transport millions of
tonnes
of
goods
in the UK and road transportation was the most popular among them.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, number, million, tonnes, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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