The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

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The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions

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analysis ,Portugal started with around 0.5 metric

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