The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 qnd 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart represents the export
earings
of the Correct your spelling
earnings
year
2015 and 2016 and other
chart shows the percentage change in values for the Correct article usage
the other
year
201 and 2016.I will explain in the following paragraphs.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, we would say that there is increase
in Add an article
an increase
the increase
percentage
of petroleum Add an article
the percentage
products
, engineered goods, agriculture products
and textiles. There was no increase in percentage
of gems and jewellery.
Add an article
the percentage
Firstly
, petroleum products
are
high in export earnings in both Wrong verb form
were
year
in 2015 60$ billion and in 2016 was around $63 Fix the agreement mistake
years
billions
respectively. Second stands Change to singular
billion
engineered
Change preposition
for engineered
good
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goods
it
was around $58 billion in the Correct pronoun usage
which
year
2015 and $61 billion in the year
2016. Agricultural products
was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
similiary
Correct your spelling
similarly
similar
on
both the years and Change preposition
in
gems
and jewellery Change preposition
for gems
products
the increased amount was same
in both Correct article usage
the same
the
years. Correct article usage
apply
Textile
was the least among all the four Add an article
The textile
products
, it was nearly to$35 billions
in 2015 and $31 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 2016.Change to singular
billion
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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