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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
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The table depicted below illustrates how much milk was produced by 4 different countries including
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala over a period of 20 years. Units are
meatured
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measured
matured
 in
liters
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litres
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. Looking from
overall
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an overall
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 perspective, it is evident that
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 was the most milk producer over the given period,
while
 Guatemala was the least one.
Additionally
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over time
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 all countries saw a rise in their production except Australia. Netherlands, which was the highest producer in all three years with rank one, started with 11.262.000, in 1990, and went a little up to 11.466.000, in 2010.
On the other hand
, Australia's milk production, which was the second rank in 1990, with 11.246.000, in 1990,
decrese
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decrease
decreased
 significantly to 9.165.000 in 2010. Turning to Tanzania and Guatemala, There was
an
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dramaticaly
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dramatically
increse
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increase
 in both countries' production
overtime
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over time
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 from 87000 to 155000 and from 26000 to 84000, respectively.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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