The diagram below shows the process by which paper is manufactured and recycled
The diagram illustrates the process of making
paper
from pine trees and the cycle of paper
recycling.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are five stages of paper
manufacture and seven methods to recycle papers
. Fix the agreement mistake
paper
However
, both of them have the same one step and share with each other.
To begin
with, the radiata pine trees are logged and then
put into a drum machine
. In the drum machine
, the skin of the trees will be debarked and turned into sheets. Each sheet is cut into small particles by a machine
so-called "chipper". After that, they will moved into a thermomechanical refiner, in this
stage, chemical water is added and the particles are now blended and mixed with the water. A new white liquid form substance is sprayed on the path in a paper
-making machine
and spread out.
Additionally
, in the recycling process, old newsprint will be stacked up and collected as well as
sent to an obliterated appliance that spins with the blade to cut paper
into pieces. The pieces will be moved to de-ink by some chemical liquid before passing through a cleaning and fine screening
process to take contaminants out of the liquid. Add a hyphen
fine-screening
Besides
, it will be poured into the thermomechanical and recycled pulp mix, then
goes
to the Wrong verb form
go
paper
-making machine
before the cycle repeats all over again.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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