The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the prices of three different metals and how they changed monthly during 2014.
Overall
, it seems that all these metals (Copper
,Nickel
,Zinc
) decreased dramatically from January
to June,however
,from July to December they fluctuated between the 3 materials.
To begin
with, Nickel
dropped from 6 % to 1 %from January
to February,further
decreasing dramatically from 1% to -3 % respectively. Zinc
for all this
period declined from January
to April and stood at July with approximately 0,5 %. In terms of Copper
from January
to February grew from 1 to 3 per cent,however
, further
declined from 3% to 1% and gained -1$ in July.
Furthermore
,from July to September all these three metals grew and stood Nickel
at -1%, Zinc
at approximately 0,5%,and Copper
at 1 %, respectively. From September to December Nickel
fluctuated from -2% to 1%,Zinc
from about 0,5% to 2%,and Copper
from 1% to 1,5%.Submitted by batirka06 on
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