You will have a speech about your country on the international college event. Write a letter to the event’s planners about the following: - Ask about the date of the event - What speech you prepared/why it should be interesting -What equipment you will need for your speech

Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health, I am writing to you concerning the next event, I will give a speech on
this
, and I'd like to ask about some details,
therefore
my message will be well prepared. First of all, I would like to ask about the date of the event as my classmates said it might be held next Wednesday,
while
the teaching honourable members mentioned that it might be on Thursday.
Secondly
, I would like to share my thoughts about the speech with you,
although
it took me nearly one month of preparation, I believe it is worth the effort because it touches deeply on the recent political issues in my country,
hence
I suppose it will be interesting. By the way, I may need some particular equipment
such
as a map and a stick to point out the changes that happened there and to show gathers what future is waiting for us in the next decade. I am looking forward to your kind reply. Yours faithfully, Adrian Maroo
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Coherence & Cohesion
For improved clarity, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single topic and smoothly transitions to the next.
Task Achievement
Consider giving more detail about the content of your speech to better engage your audience and provide a clearer insight into why it would be of interest.
Tone
Maintained a polite and appropriate tone throughout the letter, suitable for a formal request.
Structure
Clearly structured letter with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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