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The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The diagrams illustrate information about reading in
people
 below 30 years of
age
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
age
group
 of 16-17 years are the biggest readers as compared to other
age
 groups,
while
 the
people
 of
age
group
 18-24 are least interested in reading. Majority of the
people
 prefer to read printed
books
 rather than
audiobooks
 or
e-
books
. The least preferred type of book by all categories
are
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is
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audiobooks
. 90% of teens
in
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between
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 the
age
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ages
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16
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of 16
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-17 read an average of 12
books
 yearly.
Moreover
, 85% of them prefer to read printed
books
,
while
 only 15% and 20% of
people
 prefer to read
audiobooks
 and
e-
books
repectively
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respectively
. Readers in the
age
group
 25-29 occupy the second place in terms of reading with an average of 11
books
 a year, making it equal to the mean
numbers
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number
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 of
books
 read by
people
 in the
age
 groups of 18-24.
However
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 only 79% of them read
books
,
while
 81% of those in the ages of 25-29 read
books
. Just over 70% of
people
in
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between
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 the ages of 18-24 prefer to read printed
books
,
wheras
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whereas
 only less than 15% of them prefer reading
audiobooks
 and
e-
books
. The percentage of
people
 in the ages of 25-19 who like to read printed
books
 is almost the same as those in the 18-24
group
,
while
 around 15% of them love to read
e-
books
 and
audiobooks
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, group, books, audiobooks, e-books with synonyms.
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