Compared to the past, people can now work in places that are far from their homes because of modern means of transportation. How has this affected the lives of workers? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having modern transportation. Support your answer with specific reasons and example.
There are many ways of transportation developed in recent times which has allowed
people
to work
in places that are highly distanced from their homes. Modern transport systems such
as tram networks, underground trains, improved road conditions for drivers and frequent bus services have allowed people
to travel
conveniently to workplaces that are far from home. The advantages of being able to work
in places further
away include faster career advancement opportunities, more job availabilities and being part of a larger workforce. Such
benefits outweigh the small disadvantages that come with travelling such
as time
and money spent on travelling up and down.
Living in urban areas and working in cities comes with huge benefits, for example
, employees don't have to pay a higher rent to live in the city centre but still have the availability to work
in well-reputable companies located in town. Working for large companies provides job security, better career progression and a wide range of experience that comes from being part of a large workforce. Back in history when efficient travel
systems were unavailable, it would have been impossible for people
to travel
outside of their villages to work
, people
therefore
had to move away to find jobs. Nowadays, employees no longer have to leave their families behind to live alone, they can instead
commute to work
that is
miles away quickly and easily due to
the availability of modern transport systems.
Many argue that commuting to work
that is
far away is time consuming
and costly, Add a hyphen
time-consuming
however
, I believe this
disadvantage is minimal compared to the huge list of advantages. Many companies even cover the expense of travel
for employees, what's more, workers can use their time
travelling productively. For instance
, many trains now have a set-up that is
suitable for office work
, such
as seats with a desk, charging ports and wifi access. Workers can use the time
travelling to prepare and complete work
tasks which will in turn reduce their workload in the office.
To conclude
, although
it is true that working far away from home uses too much time
and money, it does not outweigh the benefits of being able to live with family and saving money by not moving to town. There is also
the additional advantage of using the time
travelling productively to complete work
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Be mindful of repeating the same ideas in different words; strive for more distinct examples or points in both the advantages and disadvantages sections to enhance depth.
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You effectively addressed both the advantages and disadvantages of modern transportation for workers, providing a balanced view.
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