You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter -Thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience -Explain what you hope to learn from the work experience -Ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do
Dear Mr.Bank
I am writing
this
letter to express my appreciation for the opportunity to join your company to do the internship program.
I feel extremely lucky to have this
chance to do my internship in your firm. Working for your organization during the coming three months not only helps me gain more work experience but also
offers me an opportunity to apply what I learnt at university to real work.
I heard from my classmates who did this
internship with your firm last
year that they were given a wide range of tasks regarding doing research about the stock markets, which is not something that I am passionate about. I am expecting to be a part of the trading team, doing stock trading every day, which can improve my practical skills.
I have a couple of queries regarding this
program. I wonder if you are able to inform me whether it will be provided free of charge. However
, if it is not, how much the cost would be every day? Additionally
, I would like to know whether I need to bring my own laptop.
Thank you again for the valuable opportunity. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Isabella LiuSubmitted by strawberry.guan on
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Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs, each paragraph discussing a different aspect of the enquiry. To further enhance coherence, consider using more linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.
Task Achievement
You have clearly expressed gratitude, stated expectations, and posed relevant questions regarding the work experience. To improve task response, ensure all questions are fully developed and directly related to your upcoming work experience for even greater clarity and completeness.
Task Achievement
The letter successfully addresses all three aspects of the task with appropriate detail.
Coherence and Cohesion
The use of paragraphs to organize different points, with a clear opening and closing, is commendable.