Task1 Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving license is advantageous. • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips
Dear James,
I hope you're doing well. I'm writing
this
letter to give you some advice with regards
to learning Fix the agreement mistake
regard
driving
and the benefits of getting the license.
There are many positives are there from getting a license. Change the verb form
to drive
Firstly
, you can drive anywhere to find jobs with your own car instead
of taking taxi
as I know very well that each Add an article
a taxi
trips
Change to a singular noun
trip
are
very expensive. Eventually, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
will help you save the money and spend on buying books.
I heard that in Greens Road, the Willam Driving School is performing very well as some of my friends have recently took
their driving test over there, and they are fully satisfied. Wrong verb form
taken
Moreover
, authorities
who are working there are very friendly, and Correct article usage
the authorities
teaching
school has Correct article usage
the teaching
good
relationship with them.
One of the most important guidance I'd like to share Add an article
a good
you
here is that you should never drive alone using Change preposition
with you
Correct article usage
a learners
learners
pass, which is illegal. I saw many learners Fix the agreement mistake
learner
do
Verb problem
make
this
mistake and after they got caught by police
they regret Correct article usage
the police
for
their mistakes. Remove the preposition
apply
This
is considered to be one of the biggest crimes in our legal system and police will give a huge penality
.
All the best,
JohnCorrect your spelling
penalty
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