The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The diagrams illustrate some detail on the ages of the people of
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 also
projections for 2050. The biggest Correct word choice
and also
amount
of population in Yemen
was the 15-year-old by almost 50%; however
, it is expected the higher range will be 15-59-years people in 2050. Italy's 15-59 years population was approximately 61 per cent
and this
amount
will be the biggest one in 2050 too.
Yemen
's community under 15 years old was half of the population in 2000 this
group was 61% in Italy after that 15-59years was the huge amount
by 46% in Yemen
and 61.6% in Italy and the latest one by almost 3.5 per cent
the oldest community in Yemen
and one fourth in Italy.
It is expected the
15-59 years persons to be the biggest Correct article usage
that
amount
in both of this country
in 2050 Fix the agreement mistake
these countries
however
, 0-14years will be 37 per cent
in Yemen
and 11.5 per cent
in Italy the 60+ people will increase dramatically in 2050 in Italy however
these persons will decrease by 5.7 in Yemen
in this
year.Submitted by TUTOO on
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