Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

It is often argued by

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individuals that teaching

children

at

home

is prime for a

child

's development,

however

, other people believe that it is essential for

children

to go to

school

.

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essay will articulate both methods of

this

argument and as far as

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am concerned

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am in favour of

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notion. To commence with, learning at

home

can enhance the skills of

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children

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child

and parents can take

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good care of them. To explain it, studying in

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homely

environment will help the

child

to learn quickly and easily

while

parents can easily feed or watch them.

For

instance

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a

child

who

are

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taught at

home

are

fast

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learners

then

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who

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those who

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have studied

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schools or

institution

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.

As a result

, it is proved that teaching

children

at

home

is beneficial.

Furthermore

,

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and communication

skill

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is

most

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important

part

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of anyone's life and

school

is the best place where we can learn these skills. In

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other words,

school

play

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role in

child's

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a child's

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development as they have the system of teaching in groups and a team

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, which enables them to learn teamwork and

help

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helps

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them to communicate with each other. As an

illustration

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illustration,

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some studies reveal that

student

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students

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can learn very quickly in groups rather than studying alone at

home

.

Hence

, it is

indisputable

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fact that

children

learn teamwork quickly at

school

. In conclusion,

although

,

home

learning

have

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many benefits,

i

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believe

childrens

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children

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must go to

school

to learn various kinds of skills and become

sucessful

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successful

in their career.