The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after construction. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuresl and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the changes before and following the building of
Benfield
Neighbourhood
. Before the construction, there were many trees, a barn
, and a cornfield
, although
many homes are
built after it, and a new Wrong verb form
were
road
is
replaced by the fence.
Before the construction, the Wrong verb form
was
neighbourhood
was divided into three areas; the woods were on the left, the cornfield
was on the right below, and the settlement area was on the right over the cornfield
. There was a road
from the south to the north of the Benfield
in the middle of the right and left. Cornfield
and the settlement region was
separated by a fence. There was a Correct subject-verb agreement
were
barn
and a farm in the place that
people lived.
Throughout the construction of the Correct word choice
where
Benfield
, a lot of trees were cut. Moreover
, the barn
and the cornfield
were replaced by new houses, meanwhile, a new road
is
built between the old Wrong verb form
was
cornfield
and the settlement area, also
the fence is
removed. There are quite a few trees Wrong verb form
was
is
still in the park, though. Unnecessary verb
apply
Park
is situated below in the left part of Correct article usage
The park
Benfield
Neighbourhood
.
Overall
, after building many homes in the neighbourhood
, there is still a park so that families can spend time with their family and friends. In addition
to this
, a new road
was constructed in
between the old Change preposition
apply
barn
and the field.Submitted by viktoria.popova92 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words benfield, neighbourhood, barn, cornfield, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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