Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case ? What can be done to attract more local people ?

Today, many

places

, especially

museum

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museums

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and historical

sites

, face a problem with visitors which

attract

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attracts

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more tourists rather than local

people

.

This

essay will try to identify the factors contributing to

this

problem and

also

put

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towards that. There are many reasons why

museum

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museums

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and historical

sites

are more popular

to

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tourist

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tourists

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either from foreign

coutry

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countries

or

city

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cities

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that

located

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far away from the buildings.

To begin

with, I guess that the most significant reason would be because of the advertising. Nowadays, the management of

the

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museum

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museums

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and historical

sites

tend

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to use

an

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online

adertisement

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advertisements

.

This

kind of advertisement will appear in every smartphone wherever it is as long as the smartphone is connected to the internet and it will attract more foreign

people

to come.

Furthermore

, the reason why the local

people

do not like to visit the

sites

is because the ticket to enter

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museums

and historical

sites

are

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expensive if we compare it to other recreational

places

.

As a result

,

people

will choose to visit other

places

than go to a place that

close

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to them but

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a high price. The management can do various things to solve

this

problem.

First,

they should advertise the

museum

and historical

sites

using local

newspaper

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newspapers

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to attract many local

people

there. They may use

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posters

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,

leaflet

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leaflets

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, or even

a

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billboard

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to attract

people

.

Secondly

, the management can make a promo

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ticket

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tickets

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, like a group promo or a family promo that

discount

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discounts

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the price, so

people

will likely

to

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choose the historical

sites

rather than going to any other recreational

places

. In conclusion, the

reason

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reasons

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behind the rise of

tourist

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tourists

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visiting

museum

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museums

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include online advertising and the price of the ticket, and

posibble

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possible

solutions are local advertising

as well as

a discount on the tickets.