IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Developing the economy will always damage the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that there will always be a detrimental effect on nature due to the progress of the economy. I partially agree with this, for an accelerating speed of excavation of natural resources in spite of the growing awareness of the importance of protecting wildlife.

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In many countries, there is shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the country side, others argue for the regeneration of cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of building new towns in the country?

The growing population confirms that humanity is thriving, but it also brings new challenges, especially around food and space. This is proven by the housing crisis that exists in the world. The argument of whether the new housing should be set in the countryside is a debatable one, that is both agreed upon and disagreed with by many. The two sides of this will be thoroughly analysed and discussed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, many organizations allowed their employees to work online while staying at home. While a considerable amount of individuals want to work in the office. In my opinion, I agree with people who choose to work at the workplace in real life because they can interact with their colleagues and bosses, besides, they can share ideas and opinions related to business.

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Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for the individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this?

The following essay will go into detail about: the risks, rewards, benefits and my own personal opinion on taking loans and credit cards and will be answering the question about the difficulty in taking a loan.

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Banks should receive billions of dollars in assistance from their governments during a financial crisis that was in large part their fault. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons

Some people say that governments should support banks when they have trouble, while others believe that they are not in charge of that. In this report, I will present both sides of this conflict, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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These days, many people rely on traditional medicine. Is this a positive or negative development?

Although traditional medicine is thought by some to be a good alternative to modern one, other people visit doctors. In my opinion, I think that self-medication can bring about more problems compared to any advantages it might bring.

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Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s era, many parents let their kids use iPads and mobile phones in order to increase their learning abilities. This essay will argue that the advantages do not outweigh the drawbacks.

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

There is less and less population in the countryside and more and more population in the cities because people in all corners of the country tend to migrate to big metropolises. Whether this phenomenon is positive or negative is questionable. I believe, however, that it could have a negative impact on people’s lives and this essay will extensively outline why this could be a negative occurrence.

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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Contemporary examinations often assess students' ability to regurgitate memorized facts rather than emphasizing the application of knowledge. Consequently, it's tempting to adopt the notion that rote memorization is pivotal for educational success. However, I strongly disagree with this perspective and contend that genuine educational achievement hinges on the practical application of acquired knowledge in real-world scenarios.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today believe that learning in groups, in classrooms, has more advantages for students than studying remotely. I completely agree with this sentiment, as studying in classrooms, surrounded by students of similar ages and goals, helps to nurture important communication skills among students and also helps teachers pay more attention to their students.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others beleve this may have negative effects on a child's development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by 2 groups of the crowds if time spent on entertainment on the screen is valuable for children, In my aspect, I'd say that it depends on the effects after usage.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In today's society, there is an ongoing debate regarding task given to children by teachers to do at home. While some opine no homework policy should be adopted by schools. Others contend, afterschool work is vital and helps young adults in their education. I am in favour of the former statement, as it helps youngsters to focus on other activities and explore their interest. This essay will explore the contrasting prespective and my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In today's societ, there is an ongoing debate regarding celebration of events. While some opine spending heaps on their important days such as birthdays and anniversaries are crucial. Other contend it as an utter wastage of resources and liquidity. This essay will explore the contrasing prespective of both the parties in subsequent paragraphs.

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some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young, while others think it is better for them to attend kindergarden. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals argue that children,who are very young, should be schooled at home by their parents while some say attending kindergarten is a better alternative for this age. I personally have a balanced opinion of this argument and I will describe the main reasons supporting it with some examples in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some have suggested that the learner can have more ability and do something with fault, while others hold an opposing view that a person should give more prevented and tend to believe that their offspring can not do something with a misstep. In my opinion, I agree more with the former.

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some people believe that students should learn science subjects at schools while others believe that other subjects like history is also beneficial for them discuss both views

There is an active debate in society, where some opine that being good at IT and technology is the only way to success in life. In contrast, others think it is important to have optimum knowledge of courses like history, finance and arts are helpful too. This essay will discuss both opinions in the forthcoming paragraph.

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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, global warming has emerged as a critical issue, particularly due to the emissions resulting from vehicles. There is a school of thought advocating for an increase in the cost of fossil fuels as the most effective strategy to mitigate this problem. I partly agree with this perspective and aim to delve deeper into the rationale behind it in this essay.

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Should young children be encouraged to follow strict rules based on their cultural traditions or allowed to behave freely? Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some would argue that youngsters should be encouraged to pursue tough rules based on their historical cultures and traditions, while others believe that they should be treated freely. Although cultural traditions are important because they can affect our family relationships and are agreeable to the majority of the community, I believe that freedom in behaviour leads to increased independence and improves our society.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This essay will make an effort to discuss the detrimental and profitable effects of zoo activity. There are two different sides, according to which, one part of society supposes that it is a destructive and immoral phenomenon towards fauna, while the second part disagrees and might provide a few beneficial factors of zoo functionality.

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Nowdays, more and more people don't wear their national clothes, and the clothes look almost the same all over the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There is an increasing trend that people are more inclined to wear uniformly worldwide. While I acknowledge that this trend has several positive effects, I still consider that its negative influence outweighs its benefits.

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