IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 3

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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𝙎𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙤𝙥𝙡𝙚 𝙗𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙚𝙫𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙩𝙘𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙚𝙡𝙚𝙫𝙞𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙞𝙨 𝙗𝙖𝙙 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙘𝙝𝙞𝙡𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙣 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙬𝙖𝙮. 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙨, 𝙝𝙤𝙬𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧, 𝙨𝙖𝙮 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙩𝙚𝙡𝙚𝙫𝙞𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙞𝙨 𝙜𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙘𝙝𝙞𝙡𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙣 𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙙𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙥 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙜𝙧𝙤𝙬 𝙪𝙥. 𝘿𝙞𝙨𝙘𝙪𝙨𝙨 𝙗𝙤𝙩𝙝 𝙫𝙞𝙚𝙬𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙤𝙥𝙞𝙣𝙞𝙤𝙣.

The role of television in children's development has been a subject of ongoing debate, with some individuals vehemently opposing it, while others advocate for its potential benefits. From my perspective, television can be beneficial if appropriately utilised.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, lots of ways appear to help students get their best results in academic education. This author argues that the drawbacks of lacking communicative skills and educating without professionalism outweigh the benefit of flexible time to study.

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Many work people today work at home rather than in an office. Are there more advantages to working remotely than disadvantages?

In the modern world, with the significant development of technology, many people choose to work from home with computers and phones. From my perspective, I believe this has more advantages than disadvantages, and some justifications will be presented in this essay.

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Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that the internet helps people to be closer to each other, however, others have an opinion that communities are becoming more isolated. This essay will discuss both points of view and my opinion.

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Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, teenagers are becoming lazier and do less exercise than people many decades ago. Therefore, there is a need to add more mandatory sports lessons in schools for students. In this essay, I will present reasons for not being persuaded by this statement.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?

These days e-books have gained immense popularity all over the world. However, while some people believe this is a positive development others think it is negative. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of digital books.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Whether children should be sent to school or they should be taught at home for their development? While the benefits of home teaching to children include a flexible schedule and a safe learning environment, there are also the advantages of school teaching owing to managing their time and discipline in the classroom.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Spare time activities for children play a crucial role in their lives. While chosen by parents, these activities can help children accomplish the right tasks, activities that are chosen by children will make them more decisive in the future.

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in many countries, governments are interesting in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

In today's modern age, there is a tendency for many governments all over the world to use new technological methods in order to address the community rather than approach the public in a conventional way due to the increasing demand for use effectively. With the convenience of time and the sustainability of investment, I totally contend that technology in terms of politics is a potential development which should be invested.

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Scientists and technology experts are more valuable to society than artists.To what extent do you agree with this view?

Science and technology technology have played a very important role in uplifting the human race. The level of modernization and globalization that has been reached is because of new emerging technologies . In my essay, I will be discussing how scientists and artists are important parts of our society.

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In many countries governments are interesting in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening. Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money.

In current times, numerous countries governments are fond of new technology to tackle with the public. This problem occurs due to reducing the human errors and serving for the higher demand of human being. Moreover, I hold to a belief that this is an appropriate utilization of government expenditure.

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, most societies have some problems for kids, especially teenagers. In some regions of the US, there is a rule which is prohibited to go out during the night without an adult. Some people believe that it is the best way to protect and monitor them. I completely disagree with this idea, and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. While some argue that age should not be a determining factor in punishment, I firmly believe that young people should be held accountable for their actions.

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Some people say that when deciding how taxes are spent, government should prioritize health care. Others think that there are more important priorities for tax-payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your

Various controversies have emerged as to whether the government should spend taxes on health care or other crucial sectors. Some people insist that healthcare systems are vital to their countries, especially for those with enormous elderly people. Nevertheless, I believe that taxes should be distributed to different areas.

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fast food has become cheaper in recent years. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Junk food is available at low cost in recent years. Although this change saves money, its disadvantages of increased health illness and decreased family bondings are more significant.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

There is no doubt that most adults spend the majority of their day all work. Thus, it is extremely important that their job is both a reward and fulfillment. I will examine these factors related to job satisfaction and how realistic these factors are.

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In most countries, the crime rate is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

The number of crimes globally is frequently higher in central areas compared to remote ones. This is mainly because of the large population and poverty combined with unemployment. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to overcome the issue of high crime rates in urban areas.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

One of the most serious issues facing the majority of the world is a disease prevalent among new young, especially, The big reason is to eat unhealthy food, however, it can be solved by exercising and following by healthy arrangement.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Currently, people have more curiosity about the history of the places they inhabit. There are many explanations for why dwellers want to acquire this information. Besides, the documentation could be found on paper or virtually and there is an increasing population that keeps this valuable information. In this essay, I will explain why and how to investigate (about) places in which humankind lives.

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In many countries, men and women are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world, in order to live comfortably both males and females are obliged to take full work shifts. Bearing in mind the equitable distribution of work, regardless of gender, home tasks should also be equally shared between women and men. It is my contention that there should not be an impediment that prevents people from equitably allocating chores among themselves at home to promote gender equality and ensure respect and dignity between the members of opposite sexes.

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