The diagram belows show the production of olive oil.

The picture illustrates a production of olive oil

starts

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with picking olives and finishes with selling in

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storage.

Overall

, there are 7 steps

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as picking, rinsing, smashing, bagging, pressing, separating and selling, 1 ingredient and 5 equipment. The first step in the process is picking up olives from trees. After getting the main ingredient they are rinsed

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cold water.

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clean olives are belted by special equipment after which the general

ingredient

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ingredients

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are smashed.

As a

result

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result,

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might be received 2 products

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as olive paste and olive stones.

Subsequently

,

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are packed in bags with holes. After bagging these bags with olive production will be pressed thanks to heavy special

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.

Following

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, pressed bags are separated in huge

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in order to distinguish

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between

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two separate products

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as oil

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and water. The process finishes with distributing for storages and

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going to be

selled

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sold

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for customers.