IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g. goods, service, news, ….) Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development?

The demand for instant punctuality is increasing. I believe this situation is a positive development due to the fact that it increases our pace of life which may lead to more efficiency, and also the fact that punctuality reinforces good habits is a positive factor, despite some who believe this pace may introduce more stress in people’s daily lives.

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Today more and more people want things instantly. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people lead a hectic schedule which makes lives faster. Furthermore, this is the major cause of demanding things instantly. I believe this is a positive development due to the advantages of encouraging in development of the commercial and social prevalent values.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (ex: goods, service, new). Why is this ? It is positive or negative development?

There is an increase in the number of people who want things instantly. This writer considers that the reason for this phenomenon originated from a busy lifestyle and it seems to be a positive development.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. School should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subject such as information technology. To what extent do you agree.

Some people believe that the purpose of education is to prepare children and students for the problems that the modern world creates rather than teaching them art and music so that they fully focus on something more useful like information technology. The fact that the art and music are not useful at all is disagreed. Analyzing developed countries care and their education system teaches about it will further prove this point.

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What is your opinion of the custom of tipping? What are the positives and negatives? If you are in a foreign country where tipping is customary, do you believe you should tip, even if it is not customary in your home country?

Tipping a waiter is often seen as a gesture of appreciation for their service. Many individuals consider it an act of kindness to leave a gratuity after dining in a restaurant. However, the custom of tipping has both positive and negative aspects. In this essay, I will explore these aspects in detail and address the question of whether tipping should be obligatory, particularly in foreign countries where it may not be customary.

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Some people believe that children should continue schooling until 18 years old while others suggest that schooling till 14 years of age is enough. Discuss both views and present your opinion.

These days, some individuals claim that students at schools should study until 18 years of age however others believe that it is adequate to study up to 14 years old.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impacts on environment and on people who lost their job because of it.

These days, people have been using online platforms to shop and purchase things instead of going to physical shops. The impacts of online shopping on both the environment and individuals will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

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Many companies are developing electronic books. Some people think these books will replace paper books in the future. To what extent do you agree.

Nowadays, the majority of people are of the opinion that paper books will be replaced with electronic books which are developing by some companies. In my opinion, this idea would be true mainly because of having easy access to modern books.

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In many countries schools have several problems with students behaviour. what do you think are the cause of this? What solution can you suggest?

There is an increasing number of student attitude problems in school systems in different nations. I think the main causes are the influence of social media on student’s behaviour and the lack of family control over their children. The most viable solutions are to ban using smartphones in school and to conduct educational workshops for parents about behavioural problems.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The high rate of working time has been highlighted over the past decades. From this aspect, questions about whether nations with a long average working time are also likely to suffer from detrimental social consequences arise. In my opinion, nations would suffer from negative social results to some extent.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

These days, there is a concept that in the near future, all private vehicles as well as lorries will be autonomous and individuals instead of driving them, can use them as a transportation facility. This essay will argue that the benefits of driverless automobiles outweigh their drawbacks. This essay will first demonstrate that vehicles that are driven by robots are much safer and the utilization of these types of facilities could reduce the amount of traffic in cities. Then, it will argue that the fear of replacing humans with robots will not be valid.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

It has been pointed out that an increasing number of individuals decide to have their first kid in their late thirties or forties. Personally, I opine that the stiff competitive atmosphere in our society causes this circumstance, and this disgraceful trend is detrimental to the development of our country from different aspects.

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Some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that when students study in the university, they should not pay any money. In my opinion, I agree with this view because this can help students continue their education and also, many people in the country will be educated.

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

It is thought by some people that using machines to work can ease users' hardship and harmfulness while others might say it is not safe to leave automation doing all the work. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be outlined before reaching a conclusion.

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These days the majority of employers require good social skills. While these social skills could improve employee management and bring effective networking, these could social skills could not determine exact qualification and abilities. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays recruiters seek to find workers with good social skills to help in dealing with and managing . However, may not measure the quality of other crucial job requirements. In my opinion I agree, that as much as emotional intelligence and connections are essential other aspects of employee capabilities are much more important.

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Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that supporting the children’s schoolwork by their parents is more important than others. However, I firmly believe that it is more helpful for parents to spend time doing activities with their children because it makes kids feel close to their parents and grow up in emotional development.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many individuals argue that the appearance of technology and social online platforms have a disadvantaged influence on youngsters and their subsistent relationships between people and people while on the other side people trust that these platforms provide many sides 10 know each other After considering both of the statements in this notion, from my perspective, it is more beneficial for young people to search information and keep in touch with others with the second notion.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

In contemporary society, due to the development of technology, the interest in nuclear weapons has increased. The threat of nuclear weapons could be beneficial to our society such as inventing technology, however, I also believe this has harmful effects on not only society but also citizens's lives so that it can't maintain world peace.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a student who is pursuing a degree and working on his startup simultaneously, I disagree with the statement. My preference and answer to the question will be discussed further.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today’s modern world, countries look the same as people are buying similar items from anywhere in the world. I am of the belief that this could have positive outcomes, such as increasing companies sales and reducing the cost of travelling abroad. My contention will be further explained.

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