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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Chigozie Ogbonna: Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it becomes increasingly common to buy things on the Internet like books, air tickets and groceries. In this essay, I will explain why the benefits of buying things online overshadow the potential drawbacks.

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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

There is a common belief that the government should fund education and healthcare and it should be provided free for the general public. I completely disagree with this opinion because education and healthcare both are expensive fields of expenses to the government so general people should contribute according to their financial abilities.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. OR Some People prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, and others prefer to change their jobs from time to time. Discuss both sides and state your opinion. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we can see that a chunk of individuals prefer to work in the same working environment whilst the rest of them are opponent of it. I will discuss both ideas in this essay, followed by my own perspective on this matter.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking the for education and constantly facing under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

School is a place for students to receive knowledge. Not a few students have declining grades and are often stressed. One of the causes is that students go to school while earning money to meet their needs. The causes of the issue and what kinds of methods can be taken to solve this will be discussed in the essay.

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Some are of the opinion that owning a business brings burden, while some others think being an entrepreneur gives choice for a person to live in a way he want to.I agree that an entrepreneur had flexibility and freedom to design a life they would love to live.

Some are of the opinion that owning a business brings a burden, while others think being an entrepreneur gives a choice for a person to live in the way he wants to. I agree that an entrepreneur has the flexibility and freedom to design a life they would love to live.

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Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is an ongoing discussion about peoples' concern over the side effects of tourism using cultural activities to create an entertainment business and how it destroys traditional values. While the rest of the majority believe that this is the unique way to protect cultural values. I believe that the second statement being true to its appearance and bringing tourists for entertainment will provide enough budget to save the tradition.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It's widely acknowledged that it is essential for all cities and towns to include a large number of public places and parks. Certain people may argue the importance of having such places. In this essay, I will cover both viewpoints, supported with examples and evidence.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a property?

In the modern era, anything can be rented such as houses, cars and bikes. Similarly, this is becoming common in most countries to rent a place to live rather than purchase a property. However, there are certain pros and cons of this situation that I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is a common belief that in university education, all fees for their own study should be paid by pupils because personal university advantages are more than that in social life. In my opinion, I predominantly disagree with this statement for the reasons of finance and balance, which will elaborate on the reasons.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study , because university education benefits individual rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

A majority of people believe that students should invest all their money in their own safety because a university education has more advantages than society. This essay disagrees with the statement and explains it in the following paragraphs.

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Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some are of the opinion that life in towns is far more advantageous than life in rural areas. This essay agrees with this statement because cities provide job opportunities and access to various services.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is apparent that the military plays an important role in protecting nations. This is the reason why some people argue that male adolescents should attend military service after they complete their education and this practice could possibly be used with females. Personally, I disagree with this statement because the country will waste their budget, and it is not women's fields of occupation. In the following paragraphs, the details will be elaborated on before the conclusion is reached.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

Over the years,healthcare and education have been the major benefits provided by the government of many countries in the world. Some people argue healthcare and education are the prime responsibilities that state administration should take care of, whilewhile from others' perspectives, it is adding more burden financially to the governments. In my opinion, the Government should hold this responsibility and in this essay, I will investigate both sides of the argument with justification to support my opinion.

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Someone says that job satisfaction is more important than job security, but others disagree. Discuss both views and address which one do you agree.

According to some, job satisfaction is far more paramount than job security, whereas few folks oppose this view. In reality, it's quite difficult to get a sweet spot, where we can enjoy both these aspects. However given an opportunity, I would prefer job satisfaction over the other. But, I will analyse both these standpoints and provide this inference at the end.

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Students should pay full cost of their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The full cost of study should be paid by students themselves due to the priority of university education to individuals rather than the public. Personally, this writer partly agrees with this statement because undergraduate recruitment have enough conscious thought to earn money and pay for the learning fee on their own. However, not because education in academy prefers to benefit people to society.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is expected that in the next couple of years, the printed book and newspaper will no longer be as popular as they are now, and people will be able to find their favorite books and news online free of charge. I think that with the development of technology, following the news through social media will become more convenient, but some people don’t like to read books on their devices and prefer to read them in print, and I partially agree with that statement.

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Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books.

Movies, devices, and entertainment are steadily utilized rather than books. While gadgets and films are often considered effective for socializing children and learning successfully, they also have negative aspects of entertainment.

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Some people agree with spending lots of money on weedings ? What is your opinion .

Marriage is one of the most important events in everyone's life and people usually celebrate it in a memorable way. Hence, some people spend a good amount of money on weddings while others disagree with this idea because they are more focused on spending money on other events. I believe, people should spend money on weddings.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other . Others believe people have more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether many individuals suppose that humans nowadays are more autonomous than they are, another group are on the contrary view. Even though several women who are housewives still depend on their husbands' salaries, I believe that people become much more independent than before due to many youngsters can earn lots of money when they are pretty young.

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Some people belive that watching tv is bad for children while others claim that it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Today, many people believe that watching TV is not good for children, in contrast, the majority of people assume that it can benefit children. This writer believes that watching TV can help children improve their language skills, however, it can harm their eyes.

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